Saturday, January 08, 2011

Poem 241KH penned by Cmmdr

I am not sorry for my soul
That it must go unsatisfied,
For it can live a thousand times,
Eternity is deep and wide.

I am not sorry for my soul,
But oh, my career is such a pile of shit
I'm like, wow, what the fuck
have I done? I'm so minor!

1 comment:

EvenMoreMinor said...

Wonderful Poem. An ode to the ages.

Starts out slow and then picks up speed during the second stanza, with a surprise coda that leaves the reader breathless.

Bravo.