Friday, October 13, 2017

Other Pros Who Are Not Lazy Dept.

".....The narrator starts out quite weak .......
I almost didn't make it through the first third of the book because he was so weak relative to other pros....."  ***

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"......D----- B------ i like his work in general. But I think it's distracting that he doesn't pronounce the most obvious things correctly - seems lazy. Examples; Nevada & Boalt Hall........"         ***




***all critiques guaranteed verbatim 

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